a_fitz85 wrote:
OK so i like the sound and looks of this
Beidh bhur ngáire agus bhur ndeora agus bhur ngrá istigh i mo chroí go deo
Do the comma's need to be placed anywhere like they are with the English?
One other question - are there more proper places to "enter" after to break it apart?
Ex:
Forever in my heart
lies your laughter,
tears, and love
Again thank you for your time and knowledge, this means so much
1) If you're repeating "agus" as Breandán did, there's no need for commas
Beidh bhur ngáire agus bhur ndeora agus bhur ngrá istigh i mo chroí go deoYou can, by the way, shorten this slightly by changing "agus" to "is":
Beidh bhur ngáire is bhur ndeora is bhur ngrá istigh i mo chroí go deoOr you can make it even shorter by setting it up as I did the singular version (that would require commas):
Beidh bhur ngáire, bhur ndeora, is bhur ngrá istigh i mo chroí go deo2) If you're breaking up the lines, I'd do it as follows:
Beidh bhur ngáire
agus bhur ndeora
agus bhur ngrá
istigh i mo chroí go deoOr...
Beidh bhur ngáire
is bhur ndeora
is bhur ngrá
istigh i mo chroí go deoOr...
Beidh bhur ngáire,
bhur ndeora, is bhur ngrá
istigh i mo chroí go deoWait for more.
Redwolf