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PostPosted: Sat 14 Apr 2012 5:32 pm 
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Breandán snuck in there ahead of me! :darklaugh:

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PostPosted: Sat 14 Apr 2012 5:45 pm 
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;) All of the above. :LOL:

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PostPosted: Sat 14 Apr 2012 5:56 pm 
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Thank you Both - i believe i am going to go with this version unless you think i should wait on another agreement, or thought.

Beidh bhur ngáire
agus bhur ndeora
agus bhur ngrá
istigh i mo chroí go deo


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PostPosted: Sat 14 Apr 2012 6:00 pm 
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a_fitz85 wrote:
Thank you Both - i believe i am going to go with this version unless you think i should wait on another agreement, or thought.

Beidh bhur ngáire
agus bhur ndeora
agus bhur ngrá
istigh i mo chroí go deo

Always best to wait for three to agree. :yes:

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My "specialty" is Connemara Irish, particularly Cois Fhairrge dialect.
Is fearr Gaeilge ḃriste ná Béarla cliste, cinnte, aċ i ḃfad níos fearr aríst í Gaeilge ḃinn ḃeo na nGaeltaċtaí.
Gaeilge Chonnacht (GC), go háraid Gaeilge Chois Fhairrge (GCF), agus Gaeilge an Chaighdeáin Oifigiúil (CO).


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PostPosted: Sun 15 Apr 2012 11:19 pm 
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Breandán wrote:
You _can_ use English-like punctuation in Irish, especially for long lists, but the repetition of agus/is is more traditional.

It would break more naturally into four lines, I think:

Beidh bhur ngáire
agus bhur ndeora
agus bhur ngrá
istigh i mo chroí go deo


Still waiting for a third opinion on the content ...


I think it works better without the istigh: I mo chroí go deo

Beidh bhur ngáire
is bhur ndeora
is bhur ngrá
i mo chroí go deo

This is just me being picky :)

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PostPosted: Mon 16 Apr 2012 12:04 am 
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I could go either way on that but I think istigh i is more idiomatic.

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My "specialty" is Connemara Irish, particularly Cois Fhairrge dialect.
Is fearr Gaeilge ḃriste ná Béarla cliste, cinnte, aċ i ḃfad níos fearr aríst í Gaeilge ḃinn ḃeo na nGaeltaċtaí.
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PostPosted: Mon 16 Apr 2012 5:37 am 
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Breandán wrote:
I could go either way on that but I think istigh i is more idiomatic.


Me too. "Istigh i mo chroí" makes it very clear that it's "within my heart."

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PostPosted: Mon 16 Apr 2012 3:03 pm 
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Redwolf wrote:
Breandán wrote:
I could go either way on that but I think istigh i is more idiomatic.


Me too. "Istigh i mo chroí" makes it very clear that it's "within my heart."

Redwolf


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PostPosted: Mon 16 Apr 2012 3:40 pm 
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You all have been wonderful, thank you so much for everything and your time!!!


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